Here is The piece of writing
The climb
There's a man paddling through the mirror like lake looking at the view. As the sun rises it spreads a warm glow over the treetops.
Shimmering stones shine from the bottom of the lake.
The foggy Forest blanket is hard to see through but they manage to see him.
“There he is miss there he is”
“don't be silly there's no one there “
“The fog”
The children and their teacher head back to their camp
Wow ice story Katie. What picture was it.? Mabe you could tell us what picture it was
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Maybe next time show a picture!
Nice writing Katie. I like how you used those similes. Did a photo come with it? Well done. From Lila
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