Thursday, 17 August 2017
Over the past week as a class we have all been reading together we read about making good choices and not giving up
Thursday, 10 August 2017
We are doing persuasive writing again I'm doing mine on clubs in pod5
We are publishing them into booklets like these
We are publishing them into booklets like these
Thursday, 3 August 2017
This week in writing we used LPG 9&20
Here is The piece of writing
The climb
There's a man paddling through the mirror like lake looking at the view. As the sun rises it spreads a warm glow over the treetops.
Shimmering stones shine from the bottom of the lake.
The foggy Forest blanket is hard to see through but they manage to see him.
“There he is miss there he is”
“don't be silly there's no one there “
“The fog”
The children and their teacher head back to their camp
Here is The piece of writing
The climb
There's a man paddling through the mirror like lake looking at the view. As the sun rises it spreads a warm glow over the treetops.
Shimmering stones shine from the bottom of the lake.
The foggy Forest blanket is hard to see through but they manage to see him.
“There he is miss there he is”
“don't be silly there's no one there “
“The fog”
The children and their teacher head back to their camp
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